a Harry Potter AU by SkoosiePants ([info]dirtytrousers) wrote,
@ 2006-05-10 13:08:00
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In which there is an interlude of dancing


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Cho Chang was sweet and pretty, with a charming Scottish lilt and bright eyes, and Lav liked her instantly.

She hadn’t been expecting to, of course, but she easily won her heart when she’d grabbed Ron’s hands and tugged him out onto the dance floor right under Pucey’s nose.

CJ rolled up beside her at the edge of the slippery parquet flooring, and Lav slanted him a look. “She’s nice.”

“Yeah,” he answered, grinning.

The DJ was playing something half-slow and awkward, a request, and Ron was flushed and Cho was laughing up at him, her slim, narrow fingers nearly eclipsed by his wide hands.

Lav cleared her throat, going for more overt friendliness than usual, since he’d been mostly bearable for the past week. “You’ve been with her awhile?”

He turned to gaze up at her, bemused. “We’re just friends.”

Lav almost bit out, “No way,” except CJ seemed completely sincere, and for a smart man he was apparently very, very dense. She debated letting him in on Cho’s really-not-secret-love for him – if she wasn’t in formal wear, Lav suspected she’d be sporting a tee with CJ’s handsome, grinning face on it; the girl practically glowed around him – but it really wasn’t her place. Plus, his obliviousness made him seem slightly more human.

“Ron has no rhythm at all,” CJ said conversationally, just as Lav lifted her pint to her lips.

The spit-take was a near thing, but she managed to swallow the ale, pressing a hand to her chest and choking on a laugh.

“What?” CJ asked, bewildered.

“Ron,” she wheezed, then shook her head. “Ron has nothing but rhythm.”

“So you say.” His amused eyes doubted her claim.

“No, honestly. He’s just always been a bit clumsy on his feet. Give him a few minutes to settle in.” Lav nodded decisively.

Finally, the music exploded into something fast and lush, and Cho’s confident and cajoling grin seemed to rub off on Ron as he swung her around the dance floor, laughing. His big feet caught the upbeat with perfect time, and Lav recognized a bastardized waltz somewhere in there before he let the small girl go and lifted his arms with abandon.

Cho shook her arse and waved at CJ, and Lav marvelled again how the boy could completely miss the infatuated smile.

“Come on,” Lav said, snagging CJ’s glass and downing the rest of his wine, then pushing both of their empties onto a passing waiter, “we’re going in.”

“You dance?” he asked, brows arched in mock-incredulousness.

She gave him a hairy eye. “You tell anyone and I will kill you.”

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[info]nunshavingfun
2006-05-10 05:18 pm UTC (link)
CJ is so dense! *is pointing out the obvious*

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[info]hope_h87
2006-05-10 05:27 pm UTC (link)
I always knew Ron was a dancer. Bless CJ not knowing about Cho.
excellent update :)

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[info]nutty_moo
2006-08-14 10:44 pm UTC (link)
OMG i onlt just started and finished reading this in the last wek and OMG the love is well OMG there is sooooo much love...

I am in love with ALL the characters because i am cheap and sluttish :P...

But yes i like how every one knows everyone...

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[info]bitterling
2006-05-10 06:15 pm UTC (link)
Yes! AN UPDATE!
And this is the closest I've been to the beginning of your
comment list so I feel cool.

Anyway--- it's my last class period in school and I decided
skip 12th period Study to hang around my band teacher's
office to use his computer to do absolutely nothing on.

AND I DISCOVER AN UPDATE!

So I'm glad I skipped 12th period study. And I like your Cho
Chang. I only really like the one in the series because she's
Asian--- but you made her so refreshing! Good show.

[excuse my long comment]

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[info]bitterling
2006-05-10 06:20 pm UTC (link)
And I liked that "bastardized waltz" bit you threw in there.

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[info]carnilia
2006-05-10 06:18 pm UTC (link)
HUZZAH!

I adore this.

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[info]schlicky
2006-05-10 06:23 pm UTC (link)
I love the obliviousness that is CJ in this installment. It makes me laugh, mostly becuase I notice that kind of thing about people in real life all the time. Yay for dancing!

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[info]insipid_paragon
2006-05-10 06:41 pm UTC (link)
Yay for not-good at dancing, then whoosh gettin' teh rhythm Ron, oh that image is just adorable.

Clueless CJ is pretty awesome, too. I find I quite like the thought of Cho sporting a t-shirt with his "handsome, grinning face" on it! Hee!

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[info]littleleggylulu
2006-05-10 06:59 pm UTC (link)
oooh you are very possibly my favorite person on the planet (barring oprah of course!) love this and obviously didnt see it before i posted to the sga/hp-crossover-with-the-impossible-to-remember-title!
love it

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[info]lazigyrl
2006-05-10 07:01 pm UTC (link)
Yay! For the update.

Yay! For an excellent installment in such a well crafted story.

Yay! For acually getting Ron would be a good dancer once he settles in to the groove.

and finally...

Yay! For the cute cluelessness of CJ. Got to love those clueless guys.

Lori

PS The run on cheering may be a result of being swallowed up in the current hocky playoffs. I am such a Canadian at times.

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[info]alexia75
2006-05-10 07:30 pm UTC (link)
:o

You're updating again? SINCE WHEN OMG WHATHAVEIMISSED?!

*ruuuuuuns to see*

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[info]incoherenteye
2006-05-10 09:17 pm UTC (link)
Oh, I'm so excited you updated.
CJ is too dense, but that's okay. I love your series, and oh, Ron is just adorable.

:hugs for updating!:

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[info]mierette
2006-05-10 09:43 pm UTC (link)
Oh!!! Update!!! *dances along with Cho and Ron*

Lav's letting her new step-bro in on her secrets...so cute :D

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^___^
[info]ellaanabeth
2006-05-10 10:22 pm UTC (link)
First off: YAAAAAAY!!!!!! UPDATE!!!!!!!! *glomps skoosie* Update is wonderful, even just within itself.

Next: ^___^ Lav is so awesome, Ron is Awesomer, and CJ is....adorable. Now all that's left is to get back to Harry and Pansy, Draco and Ron, or Ginny and Justin. Yaaay. Also, loved the Rhythm thing, I think I actually DID do a sipt take on that- I was drinking tea. : P

Loads of Grins and Chuckles From The Cheshire Cat,

~~Elaana

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[info]thimbles
2006-05-10 10:24 pm UTC (link)
This update completely made my day :)

I love oblivious CJ and I like how you've done Cho in this. Hehe at Ron's bastardized waltz.

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[info]dicedpear
2006-05-10 11:04 pm UTC (link)
I never realize how needy I am until I read one of these and get all whiny. Write mooooooooooore. I love it, by the way. I just read Hogwarts in Space! Eeee, happiness.

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[info]stuckinsea
2006-05-10 11:10 pm UTC (link)
Yay! For updates. Thank you for the samll interlude, poor clueless CJ, and just knew that Ron could dance, wish I could see it.

More please.

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[info]eiki
2006-05-10 11:53 pm UTC (link)
I have nothing witty to say. But I did love the installment :D More CJ is good for me ;)

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[info]druidspell
2006-05-11 01:15 am UTC (link)
*thanks [info]dumblydora for telling her about the new DT update via email*

“Ron has no rhythm at all,” CJ said conversationally, just as Lav lifted her pint to her lips.

The spit-take was a near thing, but she managed to swallow the ale, pressing a hand to her chest and choking on a laugh.

“What?” CJ asked, bewildered.

“Ron,” she wheezed, then shook her head. “Ron has nothing but rhythm.”


Of course he does! He's the drummer!

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[info]zhandae
2006-05-11 08:46 pm UTC (link)
*pounces*

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[info]mima_soo
2006-05-11 10:16 pm UTC (link)
praise be to allah, yahwe, and buddha! you've updated!

poor CJ, Cho, Lav, and Ron!

at some point can Ron and Draco dance? Preferably a slow dance. At Ginny and Justine's engagment party. Though I suppose it could be Harry and Pansy's engagement party... it doesn't really matter.

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[info]wufeis_dragon
2006-05-11 10:59 pm UTC (link)
Oh goodness, how can my mind cope with this? First of all, it's an update, and second of all it has Cho. I love it. Seriously. I want to marry this fic. However, we might have to move to Utah for that, so are you up to it? Keep up the good work

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[info]updraftgirl38
2006-05-12 12:37 am UTC (link)
*delurks* This made me smile, for so many reasons. CJ's obliviousness, Lav's version of being friendlier than normal, Ron finding his rhythm, and of course:

if she wasn’t in formal wear, Lav suspected she’d be sporting a tee with CJ’s handsome, grinning face on it

I can totally see that. I have some serious love for this story, I ship all of the pairings, if only because of the way you write them!

Oh! And the whole Cho snatching Ron out from stalker Pucey's nose! Serious love! Hope it's okay if i friend this?

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[info]bizzatch
2006-05-12 02:03 am UTC (link)
you are awesome.

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[info]vintagexmodern
2006-05-12 03:24 am UTC (link)
Aww, a CJ update! *loves* He's adorable not knowing that Cho has a crush on him.

Annnd, I always suspected that Ron would be a fantastic dancer. You've got to have some rhythm to play the drums!

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[info]jamtomorrow
2006-05-12 09:44 am UTC (link)
hurrah for an update! what is a hairy eye?

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(Anonymous)
2006-05-12 04:11 pm UTC (link)
eek! can't believe i missed this before!!! so wonderful! i love them all!
although i must say, i do kind of miss hannah and terry. maybe it was just me, but, well. :)

~groovygumdrop

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[info]filigree10
2006-05-12 09:54 pm UTC (link)
Oh, great, an update! I've just gone back and re-read the whole thing from the beginning, which was enough to make me feel good for a week. I love the way the characters are developing!

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*squeee*
[info]seratonation
2006-05-13 07:32 am UTC (link)
So i like totally squeed when I saw this, :D:D its good, nice to see Ron and Lav and CJ and Cho!!! again :D And Cedric is so dumb *eyeroll* and Ron with Rythem is awesome :D

that just made my day :D:D

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[info]annemjw
2006-05-13 09:34 am UTC (link)
Heee, I love this Lavender.

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[info]megaloo13
2006-05-14 07:41 pm UTC (link)
How did I miss this update? Curses for moving from the dorm to home midweek!

Hee, CJ not getting Cho's crush is adorable. As is Lav's whole attitude. :) Lovely update!

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[info]kws136
2006-05-14 11:54 pm UTC (link)
Awww! First off, of course Ron has rhythm! He's a drummer! Lav really needs to bite the bullet, aknowledge that she does, indeed, like CJ, and bring him to Curley's. Then he'd see. *nods* ...plus, I'm sure Seamus, Hermione, Parvati, Ginny and Justin would all be happy to point out that Cho's in love with him. You know, for his own edification and all. Great update.
XOXO
Kate

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[info]megglez13
2006-05-15 10:03 pm UTC (link)
Yay, update!!
I am in love with this thing *glomps*

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[info]stereotype_vamp
2006-05-21 11:37 pm UTC (link)
Oh gosh, Skoos' it's been SO LOOOONG since I last visited this little place of heaven.

And I've caught up with everything, and I LOVE LOVE LOVE it! You have my utter admiration, as always. ^__^

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Completely fabulous!
(Anonymous)
2006-05-25 10:16 am UTC (link)
Hi,

I just stumbled upon 'Stranded' on fanfiction.net, and I absolutely loved it! You've got a gift for humor, wit and an incredible writing style. I love how you retain the characteristics of everyone, while putting them in mad, outrageous situations!
So, anyway, I did a search and had the good luck to spot Dirty Trousers. Since yesterday, all I've been doing is reading each installment of this amazing story. It's so damn good! I laughed throughout! Love all the pairings and characterizations, and how you retain details about everyone in this Muggle universe, from Luna's spaced out, UFO obsessed dad (Quixotic! Haha!) to Harry's talent for painting and getting himself into crazy situations, to, well, just about everyone.
Can't wait to read more!

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[info]audrey1nd
2006-05-29 05:33 am UTC (link)
Yo, I totally thought that I responded to this like, weeks ago. Well, anyways, I loved this. Lav/Cedric, very original. Now I really want to read some crack!slash. Written anything non-SGA lately, as I sadly, do not watch it?

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[info]maya_morning
2006-05-30 12:36 pm UTC (link)
I have returned to Dirty Trousers! Well that and I'm determined to take a break form trying to cram Italian history into my head!

Poor dense CJ. He is so silly. And I like the way you've used Cho's scottish accent in the new Harry Potter film. Very nice!

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(Anonymous)
2006-06-10 03:21 am UTC (link)
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Please. This is one of the best fanfics out there!!!

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[info]darkhamadryad
2006-06-24 04:44 pm UTC (link)
*delurking*

That was brilliant. I'm addicted. I discovered the A/U last night and I've been pretty much reading nonstop. And I want an update because I want to continue reading nonstop. And it's all your fault.

So there.

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(Anonymous)
2006-06-26 01:11 am UTC (link)
Hey, I'm not on LJ so sorry for the anon user thing. I just wanted to say I adore your stories and writing style. It is ridiculous but I have been reading all your SGA fics, (cause I finished all the HP ones) and I live in Aust which doesn't even show SGA. I love dirty trousers and I hope you get to updating it soon- I check almost every day

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[info]fadedbluejeans
2006-07-04 10:20 am UTC (link)
Hey,
I discovered this fic yesterday, and instantly fell in love with it, but wanted to get to the end before I commented. It's brilliant and witty and breaks all of my guidelines on fics to aviod but is still wonderful.

I suck at constructive criticism, so I will just reiterate that this is brilliant, and add the standard petulant write more, write more, write more!!
-Cassi

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[info]fadedbluejeans
2006-11-07 08:11 am UTC (link)
Right, that's it, you must be trying to kill me. I just re-read this, beginning to end, because I was bored, and it's still just as brilliant, and there is still no ending.

This is cruel and unusual punishment of all your readers, Skoozie. Write more. Please?

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[info]skoosiepants
2006-11-07 01:39 pm UTC (link)
*laughs* Funny thing is, I just wrote the ending pages. The last five or so installments should be up any day now. Glad you enjoyed it!

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(Anonymous)
2006-08-07 07:39 pm UTC (link)
Woman I have decided you are trying to kill me. I was happily tootling along, minding my own business when I stumbled upon this so called 'dirty trousers'of yours. After I sat up reading up till 5 in the morning when I need to be up at 7 for work, I have come to plead for an update OF ANY KIND.
After reading your plead for art work and as a minor bit of bribery I promise to draw any dirty trousers related sceane your (twisted) little heart desires, hell I'll throw in a couple of portaits as well. Name it and I'll do it.

yours in despiration,

Buttons.

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[info]cherrycola_lola
2006-08-10 01:58 pm UTC (link)
i added you rather randomly skoosiepants *huggles*...but i have LOVED your HP fanfiction for aaaaggggeeeesss...it just took me a very long to set up a livejournal...(eek technology scares me and makes my brain ache so much my eyeballs want to run out of my head screaming!) but i have an account...two to be precise! :-) hope you don't mind the add...and i hope you read my fanfiction when its done!! *grins happily as its almost there* feel free to post more of your own on it too...i want it to be a huge collection! and...i love dirty trousers...please write more! ppllleeasssseee!...hermione/blaise...yum yum!! loves LoLa xxxx

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[info]duskspoken
2006-09-28 03:59 am UTC (link)
I just found this story, someone mentioned it in a comment when reviewing my story and I have to say I really love this story. You've got my three OTP's in one story. I really look forward to reading more.

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(Anonymous)
2006-10-01 08:29 am UTC (link)
aarghh!! i wasn't expecting this to be the latest installment! i was soo caught up in the fantasticness that is Dirty Trousers. Yay i love this story :).

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